Smartphone, smart porn
The cell phones of yesteryear served two purposes: making fuzzy phone calls and playing snake. With the current proliferation of smart phones on college campuses nationwide, access to media has achieved a level of effortlessness that has never been paralleled in the history of mobile technology in America.
A glance around Commons or Cross Campus is enough to deduce the general omnipresence of cell phones amidst our own university grounds. Whether a student is alone or within a group, the universal action of reaching for the mobile has become a recognizable and, possibly, caricatured...
Good job Miss Lin,
However I do slightly agree with the comment by 'ugh'. It is a nice break from reading about pakistan/afghanistan/china though.
Keep writing!
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stop trying to make uninteresting stories happen just because they involve buzzwords like "porn." this is not engaging.